Asja on Engoo letter

Hello Renata :) Thank you very much for taking my class today. I really enjoyed talking to you and I hope the class was helpful and informative, as well as enjoyable for you. Here you can find some words and sentences we used today, but please let me know if you have any other questions. Keep it up and see you soon, I hope :)

you said: When our sibling met together we usually play card and hide and seek
better to say: When we used to meet, we played cards and hide and seek.
you said: broaden my insight
better to say: broaden my horizons
you said: I usually keep photographs with me inside and I think I was beauituful
better to say: I usually keep photographs on which I look good regardless of the background
you said: I receive a very import message on fb after I visited
better to say: I received a very important message after I visited
you said: this message was talking about some
better to say: In this message, the person told me about....
you said: I very cherish this message
better to say: I cherish this message very much

1 cherish 2 horizon 3 regardless

Asja

https://engoo.com.tw/mtrls/materials_tw/material_ielts/IELTS_01_Part1_04_TW.pdf

When our sibling met together we usually play card and hide and seek
When we used to meet, we played cards and hide and seek.
broaden my insight*
I usually keep photographs with me inside
and I think I was beautiful
better to say: I usually keep photographs on which I look good
regardless of the background
grammar
when talking about past events
past tense
I chose this name / I choose this name

Describe an important letter that you have received.
 You should say:
  when you received the letter
  who it was from
  why it was important
I receive a very import message on fb after I visited...this message was talking about some...I very cherish this message
you said: I receive a very import message on fb after I visited  better to say: I received a very important message after I visited
you said: this message was talking about some    better to say: In this message, the person told me about....
you said: I very cherish this message    better to say: I cherish this message very much
I + verb
I cherish
I + adverb * verb
I very cherish - not common